I'm not feeling particularly good today, so if anything is posted it will likely be something older. This may not be the place for such things and I am probably barking up the wrong tree for wanting helpful criticism, but it's worth a shot I suppose.
Just read my previous posts. When I learn to edit posts I will fix the typos, but for now just tell me what you think overall.
Thank you for all criticism, and comments. I hope you enjoyed yourself.
Good story. Needs some work. Feel better.
ReplyDeletethis has def potential though
ReplyDeletegood post, i think :D
ReplyDeletehaha, man believe me if I feel the frustration of typos, my 'e' key works about 50% of the time I press it, I have to re-read everything I type. hope ya feel better bro
ReplyDeleteGood post. Seems like your site has a lot of content. Very nice...
ReplyDeletefeel better
ReplyDeleteGet well soon!
ReplyDeleteI believe there is a little pencil icon under your post's which upon clicking will let you edit your post. There should be a few other alternatives as well. Goodluck!