I'm not feeling particularly good today, so if anything is posted it will likely be something older. This may not be the place for such things and I am probably barking up the wrong tree for wanting helpful criticism, but it's worth a shot I suppose.
Just read my previous posts. When I learn to edit posts I will fix the typos, but for now just tell me what you think overall.
Thank you for all criticism, and comments. I hope you enjoyed yourself.